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Our Stories: A Fiction Workshop for Young Authors (Follow-Up To: What's Your Story?)

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Overview: Presents a selection of short fiction written by students in grades four through twelve followed by Bauer's comments on each, detailing what works well and making suggestions for improvements. "Budding writers will find this of interest as will language-arts teachers, who may want to add copies to their classroom collections." -- Booklist

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